WHAT WILL I SEE? by Kristen Knight

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WHAT WILL I SEE? by Kristen Knight

Post by Admin on Tue Sep 15, 2015 2:03 am


What will I see, be when I close my eyes for the last time
After I draw my last breath?
A spirit wandering the world, a part of the collective unconscious
Or, nothing only my remains returning back to the earth?
Don't believe that wishy washy crap people say
But is that a glint of fear I see way down deep in the pools behind their eyes where they think it's hidden from sight?
Fear of the unknown, fear of our being ending, fear of finality
Is fear the only reason we believe that there is something after we die?
I guess I will only know when I close my eyes for the last time
After I draw my last breath...

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Re: WHAT WILL I SEE? by Kristen Knight

Post by Admin on Fri Sep 18, 2015 2:32 am

Lovely words, I want to know more though.

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Re: WHAT WILL I SEE? by Kristen Knight

Post by Admin on Fri Sep 18, 2015 8:08 am

I love the simplicity. I say that you try and keep the simplicity but maybe take it a little deeper. I want to know more, too. I like it, it feel honest and lacks pretension.

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